Seventh day of Christmas

[sirius-luva.livejournal.com]

Since Yubi offered us Drugs and Primoris, I thought I'd offer my Primoris drabble to go with it. ;)

 

Primoris - Deceptive

  All you can hear is your heart beating; you dare not move or even look back, in this maze of dark corridors.

  Is that a footfall behind you? An intake of breath?

  Run.

  Forgetting stealth, you break into a run, feet pounding against the ground, onwards and onwards on a neverending path; you know there is a shapeless terror behind you, gaining on you, and you dare not look back. Run, until your heart gives out, and you never wake.

  Run, run, as fast as you can, little mortal man. For I am waiting, at the end of your path.

~*~


I admit, I originally wrote something that was way over 300 words for him but then this had to be a drabble, so I took the last bit and edited it to stand alone, and voila.

Comments

[http://users.livejournal.com/_silverfox/]

Oh dear! Who's he playing with?

[sirius-luva.livejournal.com]

Some random person. XD You'll see the full version eventually, it's worse. ;)

[http://users.livejournal.com/_silverfox/]

Somehow I'm not surprised.

[sirius-luva.livejournal.com]

What's that supposed to mean? ;)

[http://users.livejournal.com/_silverfox/]

That Primoris is awfully scary of course.

[misterbkeele.livejournal.com]

Hm. You familiar with Pink Floyd? Because this fic makes me think very much of their song Speak to Me/Breathe (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y1fNlMpTD3k). (I find it hilariously apt that the youtube comments say the album either makes them feel stoned, or that you should listen to it while stoned.)

[sirius-luva.livejournal.com]

xD I live under a rock and know very little of any modern English songs, I'm afraid. I'm pretty sure I've heard the name Pink Floyd somewhere...

My connection keeps going on and off and annoying me - in fact it just disappeared as I was typing this reponse - so I will save the link for when it decides to be nice.

I can really identify with Aziraphale.